If there's anything I learned from this, it's that woooaaahhooaaahohahahahoooooaaaaahhoo ooooaaahoooooahoaoohahawhoooahahowhoo oahhhhooowwhhhoaaaaaooooooo
I can't stop staring at that girl's....
Looks like you just....
CRAFTED a masterpiece.
YES! YESSSSS! Another good one!
That's something new.
Probably the most lulzy ending to tentacle rape you're ever going to see/
I can't help but laugh at the whole "You are lying" half. Great work!
The weaboo-style talking definitely keeps me from really enjoying it, though.
Not exactly what I expected.
Don't get me wrong, there's more potential in this plot than most other flash on this site. Personally, I was a bit shocked as to why nobody had actually gone through with the idea yet, and it's about damn time someone did!
That someone seems to be you, MurderMysteryMan.
Unfortunately, a couple of things just really killed the viewing experience for me. As much as I commend you for getting voice actors the way you did, they just didn't quite cut it. The animation wasn't really good enough, and the script was a bit shabby.
While overall looking at the big picture it may seem like a great flash, but it has SO many details slowly killing the overall quality and enjoyability that I failed to find myself engrossed in the plot, humor, or general experience.
I hope to see you continue this series, and I hope that you improve. Unfortunately, in your current state I can't see you're the least bit above average except for making a good theme to base the plot around.
Harsh, but I can take it. Thanks :)
I'm not amused.
Try being funny next time, okay?
Great flash, exactly what I expect from you guys.
Amazing job, everywhere.
And after reading the comments I know one thing: \
At least 50 people need to stop masturbating to pokemon.
Everything is just about flawless, the only thing you can do now is just take your current style and make it run a bit more smoothly, because I can't say I truly dislike anything. However, and I know this has been said 100 times before, but the character drawings need some work. Also, try lowing the shaking effects a little, at least so it's a tad easier to follow because there are a few points here and there where I'm thinking ""ZOMG WTF IS THIS IT LOOK LIKE AN EARTHQUAKE" Otherwise, you have little room to improve and much room to expand upon.
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