Kyeh's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Quest of the Manwhore]

Amazing.

If there's anything I learned from this, it's that woooaaahhooaaahohahahahoooooaaaaahhoo ooooaaahoooooahoaoohahawhoooahahowhoo oahhhhooowwhhhoaaaaaooooooo

[Wilhelm Park]

That's something new.

Probably the most lulzy ending to tentacle rape you're ever going to see/

[SHOCK2]

Great fighting.

The weaboo-style talking definitely keeps me from really enjoying it, though.

[Super Zombie World Part 1]

Not exactly what I expected.

Don't get me wrong, there's more potential in this plot than most other flash on this site. Personally, I was a bit shocked as to why nobody had actually gone through with the idea yet, and it's about damn time someone did!

That someone seems to be you, MurderMysteryMan.

Unfortunately, a couple of things just really killed the viewing experience for me. As much as I commend you for getting voice actors the way you did, they just didn't quite cut it. The animation wasn't really good enough, and the script was a bit shabby.

While overall looking at the big picture it may seem like a great flash, but it has SO many details slowly killing the overall quality and enjoyability that I failed to find myself engrossed in the plot, humor, or general experience.

I hope to see you continue this series, and I hope that you improve. Unfortunately, in your current state I can't see you're the least bit above average except for making a good theme to base the plot around.

MurderMysteryMan responds:

Harsh, but I can take it. Thanks :)

[Miss Dynamite 24]

I'm not amused.

Try being funny next time, okay?

[Pokemon: Fated Encounter]

Phenominal.

Everything is just about flawless, the only thing you can do now is just take your current style and make it run a bit more smoothly, because I can't say I truly dislike anything. However, and I know this has been said 100 times before, but the character drawings need some work. Also, try lowing the shaking effects a little, at least so it's a tad easier to follow because there are a few points here and there where I'm thinking ""ZOMG WTF IS THIS IT LOOK LIKE AN EARTHQUAKE" Otherwise, you have little room to improve and much room to expand upon.

[How 2 Make a Ngs Username]

I HAVE FAILED MAKING A USERNAME

Well, time to go kill myself.

[Press Start: KingdomHurts]

Didn't need the visuals to be awesome.

I simply liked the humor. It was a bit off-paced, but that added to the laughs at a few moments. Good job.

[Robot Pirates (Official)]

I do so enjoy this.

I am thoroughly amused.

[WHOOKOS Beta: Epis 1]

Ruined potential.

Now don't get me wrong, your ANIMATION is spot on. It's well done and smooth, which is NOT something I see very often. However, the voice acting was... well honestly I really hated it. The humor was very childish, and it had some improper timing. There were some parts where I laughed; but they were few and far between.

here's a lot of potential in this series, but you need to spend more time on the script and the voice overs before you start animating.